tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6010711523810642179.post8160676918070351032..comments2023-06-25T20:28:32.344+10:00Comments on Flashquake - #Fridayflash and other flash fiction: #Fridayflash - The Strange House in the SnowDenise Covey http://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6010711523810642179.post-18947949347225672382011-12-05T01:36:44.603+10:002011-12-05T01:36:44.603+10:00I enjoyed the opening that quickly set a sense of...I enjoyed the opening that quickly set a sense of place and creepiness. You've also through word choice done an excellent job at capturing the vocabulary of the child.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14170148559429001125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6010711523810642179.post-37460785465292798722011-12-03T01:25:01.551+10:002011-12-03T01:25:01.551+10:00Well, a grim and cryptic Romance if it is one. The...Well, a grim and cryptic Romance if it is one. The final image is striking. I don't know if it's the editing for the image or just that it's broken up into three scenes, but it feels too much for any of the instances to really land emotional impact. We get in and out of everything quicker than I could create emotional context. I'll be curious if the rest of your readers registered more of it.John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.com